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It's nice
when you take the time to read to me,
your latex vice
wrapped through my ears like words in wax.
As of late your cares have been lax, jackal.
It's dusty and dim and
faint outlines trace over the stucco ceiling where
we once sank in sin, and now only heady fans
turn zodiac past dilated skies.
Savannah hands.
Oceanic eyes.
I think that maybe these glasses can help me escape
your 6-minute, 8 millimeter
pixilated
tape.
when you take the time to read to me,
your latex vice
wrapped through my ears like words in wax.
As of late your cares have been lax, jackal.
It's dusty and dim and
faint outlines trace over the stucco ceiling where
we once sank in sin, and now only heady fans
turn zodiac past dilated skies.
Savannah hands.
Oceanic eyes.
I think that maybe these glasses can help me escape
your 6-minute, 8 millimeter
pixilated
tape.
Originally submitted November 9 2006.
"Mmm, I get glasses for the first time ever in a week. I'm near-sighted with a slight, well, you guess.
And other stuff happens in life.
Note the word is "pixilated", not "pixelated". There's a difference. =/ Also, I tried loose rhyming for once, and I think it turned out fairly well. Advanced critique encouraged. //points at comment box//"
"Mmm, I get glasses for the first time ever in a week. I'm near-sighted with a slight, well, you guess.
And other stuff happens in life.
Note the word is "pixilated", not "pixelated". There's a difference. =/ Also, I tried loose rhyming for once, and I think it turned out fairly well. Advanced critique encouraged. //points at comment box//"
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Sumptuous gorgeous writing. That's all I can say. It's perfect as it is, imho.