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Stigmatism by *MilkHermit:iconMilkHermit:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism




It's nice
when you take the time to read to me,
your latex vice
wrapped through my ears like words in wax.
As of late your cares have been lax, jackal.
It's dusty and dim and
faint outlines trace over the stucco ceiling where
we once sank in sin, and now only heady fans
turn zodiac past dilated skies.

Savannah hands.
Oceanic eyes.

I think that maybe these glasses can help me escape
your 6-minute, 8 millimeter
pixilated
tape.
©2008 *MilkHermit
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Author's Comments

Originally submitted November 9 2006.

"Mmm, I get glasses for the first time ever in a week. I'm near-sighted with a slight, well, you guess.

And other stuff happens in life.


Note the word is "pixilated", not "pixelated". There's a difference. =/ Also, I tried loose rhyming for once, and I think it turned out fairly well. Advanced critique encouraged. //points at comment box//"

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~itareio:iconitareio: Mar 29, 2008, 11:27:38 PM
Sumptuous gorgeous writing. That's all I can say. It's perfect as it is, imho.
*MilkHermit:iconMilkHermit: Mar 30, 2008, 1:52:20 PM
Thanks very much.

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"Of course, the entire effort is to put oneself outside the ordinary range of what are called statistics." - Stephen Spender

Fuck you, I'm a dragon!
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